A fascination in medicine was evident at an early age, leading to exploration of healthcare careers at (undergraduate institution). Without a clear career focus or study skills, I struggled early in my academic career. After a professor encouraged me to research becoming a PA, I found my excitement about science and desire to make a significant impact on others' perfectly fit that role. At the same time, I was able to see the role of PAs in the clinical setting while I worked as a medical scribe in the emergency room. Their robust medical knowledge combined effortlessly with the balance of autonomy and collaboration, ensuring patients had the best possible outcomes. Being able to witness firsthand the multifaceted role of a PA confirmed my decision to pursue the profession, resulting in a significant increase in my GPA. Not only did I improve academically and grow as a student, I decided to pursue a Masters in Human Nutrition at (graduate institution), a step on my path that enriched an understanding of evidence-based care in medicine. Completing a research-based thesis has also instilled an appreciation and interest in clinical research. I am eager to continue to build and deepen scientific knowledge and apply learned research concepts during PA school.
Having an interest in how accessibility to adequate healthcare affects various populations led to a decision to seek out volunteer opportunities in the community. Volunteering for Americares, a non-profit health clinic for uninsured individuals, taught me to be resourceful in communicating with a diverse patient population, many of whom English was not their first language. Witnessing how communication barriers can significantly affect patient care gave a profound sense of compassion, and an eagerness to serve these communities. On the other hand, volunteering at Caring Hospice reminded me of the continuum of our lives and the importance of empathy, respect, and understanding when caring for those who are near the end of life’s journey. As a PA, I want to educate patients about their health in an inclusive and respectful manner.
Transitioning to the role of an ophthalmic technician at (name of clinical practice) was a pivotal experience in my journey. As I delved into this position, I found myself immersed in the lives of patients facing sudden vision loss. One particularly memorable encounter was with Joe, who presented with a retinal detachment. Joe communicated that he was a bit worried, as he was playing tennis before the vision in his right eye became black. I guided him through each step of the encounter, which began with a medical history and ended with optical imaging, finding ways to comfort him without relying on visual cues. Treating Joe alongside Dr. Smith was rewarding as we restored his vision, but what was most impactful was the genuine gratitude Joe expressed afterward. It served as a poignant reminder of the profound influence we as healthcare providers can have on patients’ lives, as well as the reciprocal impact patients can have on us.
I am driven by a desire to evolve for the betterment of my patients, like Jane and Joe, while fulfilling a passion for medicine. Being a PA allows no room for stagnation; for it is my responsibility to impact and add value to patients and the healthcare team alike. I want to educate patients about their health in an inclusive and respectful manner. As I reflect on my path, the role of a PA uniquely aligns with core values and aspirations to directly engage with patients as their empathetic listener, voice of advocacy, and collaborative leader in their care.
This essay shows that the writer invested the question “Why PA?” with a great deal of thought. It is exceptional for the following reasons:
She writes with honesty and skill, directly responding to the essay prompt. Each paragraph illustrates an additional reason that becoming a PA is the only profession for her. She builds her case by discussing her academic achievements, shadowing and volunteering, and learning to appreciate the essential “soft skills” of compassion, sincerity, and care in a PA, which convinces the reader that she is grateful for, dedicated to, and thirsts for knowledge in the field of medicine. For these reasons, the candidate was invited to interview and received an acceptance.
In my experience, past behavior predicts future behavior. This candidate’s pattern of behavior aligns with the work and responsibilities of a PA. With a love of learning and teamwork, as demonstrated by the experiences she chose in the medical arena, the writer proves through her long-term involvement with medicine that she will seamlessly fit into the role of PA. It is clear how much effort she has invested into preparing for this career.
First, the applicant offers a vulnerable view of herself, by offering the fact that her initial undergraduate GPA was sub-par when she didn’t have a clear career goal. However, all of that changed once she found the PA profession. An AdCom will appreciate this level of honesty and forthrightness. Second, the applicant acknowledges the vulnerability of several patients during their respective medical encounters. Understanding and voicing that medicine is a delicate balance of science and humanity is key.
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