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May 2006 Volume 9, Issue 3
Free monthly newsletter Subscribers: 5122
Archives ISSN: 1526-2316
Published by Accepted.com Linda Abraham, Editor
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Accepted.com Odds 'N Ends


In This Issue:

  • Upcoming Chats: The Right Way to Use the Rankings; Michigan Medical School Admissions

  • Accepted.com Specials

  • MBA Applicants: New Program to be Announced This Month

  • Blog Posts of Interest

  • Essay Tip: Application Essays: A Balancing Act

  • Resume Tip: Graduate School Application Tool

 
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Upcoming Chats

The Right Way to Use Rankings
We are excited to host "The Right Way to Use the Rankings" with Dean Paul Danos of the Tuck School of Business; Kim Keating, Tuck's Director of Public Relations; and Della Bradshaw, Business Education Editor at the Financial Times. Although directed primarily at business school applicants, it will contain information of interest to all applicants. Attend the chat on Thursday May 4 at 9:00 AM PT/12:00 ET/5:00 PM GMT in the Accepted.com chat room.

Save the Date: Michigan Medical School Admissions
Mark your calendar: Dr. Daniel Remick, Dean of Admissions; Robert Ruiz, Director of Admissions; and Michigan Medical School students will answer your inquiries on Tuesday May 30 at 5:00 PM PT/8:00 PM ET in the Accepted.com chat room.

Accepted.com Specials

Start Your AMCAS Essay NOW and Save!
Submitting your medical school application early in the admissions season means you apply when there are more spaces and more interview slots. Applying early is a great idea. And now it can save you money too.

Accepted.com unfortunately has to raise its rates on June 1. If you purchase our Med School Initial Essay Package or Review and Editing, on or before May 31, you can avoid the price increase scheduled for June 1.

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MBA Resume Special
At this time of year I am frequently asked by MBA applicants aiming to submit for the first round deadlines, "What can I do now?" Best Practices for MBA Admissions contains many of the steps you should be taking now to actually improve your profile, but for those of you who have completed those steps and are chomping at the bit to start writing, start with .drumroll.

Your resume. You don't need to know the application questions to prepare your resume. And Accepted.com is willing to help you launch your application effort and save money. We are offering 25% off all MBA resume services during the month of May. You can start your applications before the questions and essays are available. (Discount will be taken at register.)

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My birthday is May 10. Now you can celebrate with me while you save money and improve your chances of acceptance.

MBA Applicants: New Program to be Announced This Month.
We haven't finished the final touches, but I will announce over the next several weeks a ground-breaking admissions program. Keep checking the Accepted Admissions Almanac, AKA the blog, for the announcement.

Blog Posts of Interest

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Essay Tip
 
 
Application Essays: A Balancing Act

In almost all application essays and personal statements you need to balance description with analysis, what you did with your motivation for doing it or the lessons learned. If you leave out the experiential aspect entirely, you risk writing a highly theoretical and superficial piece. Also realize that your actions and experiences speak volumes about who you are as a person. Some would even argue, myself among them, that what you do says more about you than what you believe or intend.

So why the need for both anecdote and analysis? Because telling only what you did or what happened, leaves the reader wondering why you initiated or responded as you did. In admissions, the reader wants to know what makes you tick. They want to understand motivation as well as results and impact. And impact isn't just impact on others or on an organization or even something that you can always quantify (although to the extent you can quantify external impact, you better convey it). Impact also includes the effect on you: What did you learn? How have you changed? How do you now act differently as a result of the influential experience?

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Resume Tip
 

Your Resume as a Graduate School Application Tool

If you are starting the application process for MBA, law, medical, or other graduate programs, your resume is the perfect place. There are three main ways your resume can help you at this point.
  1. Although many applications are not yet available, you can still begin the hands-on application process by writing or revising your resume. Depending on the program to which you are applying, your main "selling point" will either be your academic record or your work experience. If you are a relatively new college grad applying to med or law school, most likely your academic record will be your main selling point on your resume, along with relevant volunteer experience. MBA applicants will most likely feature their work experience. Either way, start identifying the most important features of that key selling point - try to view them from the perspective of the adcom, your target audience. Use that key selling point as the headline, the top item in the reverse chronological portion of your resume.
    Start with the facts of your employment and relevant volunteering or internships, and note (i) the tasks and outcomes you are responsible for and (ii) your accomplishments in the various roles. Also decide which information about your education you should include. Determine what format is most appropriate for your situation, the shorter resume or the lengthier CV.


  2. As you analyze material for your resume, look for gaps or areas to address to further strengthen your candidacy in the months before you start the actual applications. Say you are applying to medical school. Your research experience is unusually strong, and you also have two weeks of ER volunteering during a winter break. Well, that two weeks does indicate exposure to the clinical environment, but you certainly could deepen that exposure and also underscore your commitment to your goals by volunteering again, starting now, in another clinical environment, whether hospital, EMT, or clinic. Applying to MBA programs? Your resume may fully reflect your great quant skills, but what does it show about communication skills or leadership? Find an opportunity, formal or informal, to exercise these skills so that you can enhance your resume and, perhaps more importantly, broaden your available material for the essays to come.


  3. As the resume shapes up and you get an idea of what you'll be adding or changing as you take certain actions over the next few months, start to consider how you might work this "raw material" into a compelling and individual portrait that differentiates you - this will become your application strategy.
Cindy Tokumitsu
Senior Editor, Accepted.com
Member, Professional Association of Resume Writers

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