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February 2001 Volume 4, Issue 2
Free monthly newsletter Subscribers: 3718
Back issues ISSN: 1526-2316
Published by Accepted.com Linda Abraham, Editor
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Accepted.com Odds 'N Ends

We have decided to publish this newsletter as a service to our clients and others who register for it on our Web site. Accepted.com's Odds 'N Ends will bring you our tip of the month, admissions information for grad, law, MBA, and medical school applicants, and news about Accepted.com.

We also welcome contributions from readers. If you have comments, questions, or perhaps an article idea, please e-mail our editor. We cannot publish everything we receive, but we will try to respond to everyone. And as always, we appreciate feedback.

Index

What's New at Accepted.com
Essay Tip of the Month
Resume Tip of the Month
Grad Admission News You Can Use
Law Admission News You Can Use
MBA Admission News You Can Use
Medical Admission News You Can Use
College Admission News You Can Use
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What's New at Accepted.com

Resume and College Sections Go Live

Accepted.com has gone through a growth spurt! While the Web site is constantly growing and evolving, this past month Accepted.com added two entirely new sections: our college and resume sections. So if you have friends or relatives about to embark on post-secondary education, refer them to our new College content. If you or someone you know is job or internship hunting, send them to our Job Search section.

Of course, you or your friends may want more than excellent tips and advice. If you want a professional to edit your college application essay or write your resume/cover letter for maximum impact, please register.

Acceptances

Those acceptances are rolling in! Stanford, Kellogg, Penn, Columbia, Duke, Tuck. If Accepted.com played any role in your application process — whether as an informative Web site or advisor and editor — please let us know where you are admitted, how we helped you, AND how we can do better.

Visit our acceptance survey form, or e-mail acceptances@accepted.com. Alternatively, please let your editor know how you did.

Save the Date

On March 28, 2001, Linda Abraham, Odds 'N Ends editor and Accepted.com's president, will give a presentation at the American Medical Student Association's Annual Convention in Anaheim, California. Ms. Abraham's presentation is entitled "Ace the AMCAS Essay."

She would love to see you there. Please say "Hi."

For more information about the premed activities at the convention, please visit http://www.amsa.org/news/conv/info.htm#premed.

Essay Tip of the Month

Handling Negatives

Hey, you're not perfect. Neither am I. We're human and frequently have weaknesses to deal with. February and March's tip will help you handle evidence of your humanity.

This month, let's focus on mitigating the impact of weaknesses. What can you do to lessen the impact of low grades, mediocre test scores, or experience that may be less than ideal qualitatively or quantitatively?

Low grades - Earn new, high grades to show what you can do when motivated, mature, and not distracted by personal problems that may have contributed to a bad semester or two. One or two A's won't make up for a 2.0 GPA earned over four years, but creating a new grade point average either by taking classes at a local community college, earning an additional degree, or enrolling in a post-bac program can definitely put a different spin on a GPA that is in the 3.0 range when Top Choice U's average accepted GPA is closer to 3.5.

Low test score - No magic bullets here. You simply have to retake and raise the score. Many programs will consider the highest of your test scores. Some average, but look more closely at the most recent numbers. Don't retake if you don't have time to prepare or if you don't think you can raise it. In that case, try to take classes in your area of weakness and read next month's tip on addressing weaknesses.

Inadequate experience — If you don't have experience that is directly related to the direction you want to take, get some. Now. Even if you have already applied, your new on-point experience could provide great material for a wait-list letter. If you can't immediately get a job or volunteer position in your desired field, then either on the job, in school, or in a volunteer capacity assume responsibilities that will reflect the values of the programs you want to attend. For example, all grad programs value leadership. If you can't lead on the job, you can organize and run a charitable event for a cause that you believe in. Another example: law schools value research and writing skills. If you can't obtain a spiffy legal internship, take a class that will require a significant research project.

Resume Tip of the Month

The International Resume

Job hunters seeking employment overseas may encounter an obstacle they hadn't considered: their American-style resume is inappropriate for many foreign business cultures. It's wise to customize your resume to the culture of your specific target country, but preparing a generic International Style Resume (ISR) may be sufficient. The ISR is what Americans know as the curriculum vitae — a long (4-8 pages), detailed, often unimaginatively formatted document that tells the foreign employer everything it wants to know. The ISR is used to apply for positions in many industries, not just for scientific, academic, and medical posts as in the U.S.

The first major difference between U.S. resumes and ISRs is the personal data block. Many non-U.S. employers don't have to concern themselves with violating anti-discrimination laws, so information such as marital status, age, and health is fair game. Foreign employers will be interested in your country of citizenship, visa status or work restrictions, and gender (not always obvious from your first name to the non-U.S. reader). Your age may tell an organization whether you are too young (or too old) for an international scholarship; marital status can be relevant for determining housing needs; and your health can be more of an issue in societies where handicaps or medical conditions are accommodated less routinely.

Applying for an international job means placing more emphasis on your language proficiency (basic, proficient, fluent, or native), your previous international work or study abroad experiences, and your cross-cultural training. Non-U.S. resumes are generally less "flashy" than their American cousins — substantive words are favored over action verbs, accomplishments are more frequently omitted from the education section, and sophisticated designs are more often avoided. "Internationalizing" a resume means checking small things like date style -- changing the abbreviated U.S. date style of "month, day, year," for example, to the "day, month, year" format. Likewise, you should change your American-style "GPA" to the more universal class ranking ("top 5%") or at least spell out "GPA" and indicate what grading scale your GPA represents (3.4 out of 4.0, etc.).  Finally, language differences can be the trickiest part of the internationalized resume -- the president of a U.S. corporation may find that she has demoted herself two levels if she lists herself as "presidente" in some countries. For more information on international resumes, consult June L. Aulick's (ed.) Resumes for Employment in the U.S. and Overseas.

Paul Bodine
Editor, Accepted.com
Member, National Resume Writers Association and
the Professional Association of Resume Writers

Grad Admission News You Can Use

Higher Stipends at Yale and Princeton

The Chronicle of Higher Education reports that Yale is increasing its stipends for Ph.D. students by 20% to $13,700 per year. Yale is facing a unionization drive among its teaching assistants, but it claims the increase was not in response to the threat of unionization.

The Chronicle also reports that Princeton will provide full-tuition fellowships and stipends to all first year Ph.D. students in engineering and science. Yale, Harvard, and MIT have a similar policy.

Tenure Getting Tougher

The Chronicle of Higher Education had a lengthy article this month on the increasing demands made on junior faculty working towards tenure. The article cited instance after instance of institutions that have raised the tenure bar, specifically requiring more research and publishing. The universities, in intense competition for top undergraduate students, want their faculty to have increasingly impressive credentials — that means published books and articles in prestigious journals.

Law Admissions News You Can Use

Women Dissatisfied with Legal Careers

Catalyst, a nonprofit research and advisory organization working to advance women in business and the professions, just released a study exploring the reasons men and women are dissatisfied with the legal profession and specifically why legal employers are unable to retain women lawyers.

The study points out that although over 40% of law school students since 1985 are women, women still make up less than 16% of law partners nationally and 14% of Fortune 500 general counsels.  The study blames difficulty in balancing family and professional responsibilities along with a lack of mentors for the women's inability to advance in the legal profession.

Surprisingly, the study showed that in-house legal work did not enable women to better achieve professional or work/life goals. The study reports that while 57% of women who went to work in-house did so to achieve a better work/life balance, 66% did not find it.

MBA Admissions News You Can Use

Financial Times Rankings

The Financial Times has come out with its international ranking of MBA programs.  Here are the Top Ten:

  1. Wharton
  2. Harvard
  3. Stanford
  4. Chicago
  5. Columbia
  6. MIT
  7. Insead
  8. London Business School
  9. Kellogg
  10. Stern

For more information, FT's Top 100, the Top Ten in different fields and FT's criteria, please visit http://career.ft.com/BusinessEducation.

From the Inbox

Actually, this isn't from our Inbox; it's from the BusinessWeek Forum

In addition to the much-appreciated kudos for Accepted.com, it contains insight on writing MBA application essays and handling your recommenders:

Linda,

I just want to thank you for Accepted.Com 's advice on essays and recs. I applied only to HBS Round 1 and got in, no interview.

I think the most important thing I did in my essays was to use a conversational tone, add humor, and reward the adcom for reading them! As for the recs, I spent as much time preparing a package for my recs to use as I did writing my essays. That way I got them to say exactly what was needed and things that helped fit my whole story together.

FYI, for all those who will want to know:

Accepted to HBS, No Interview:
Female
680 (Very low quant score)
3.9 Top 3 Liberal Arts
4 W/E (1 consulting; 3 Top Brand Management)

Thanks for Accepted.Com!

Med Admissions News You Can Use

University of Chicago Medical School Dean Resigns

Dean Glenn Steele is leaving the University of Chicago Medical School to take over the rural HMO, Geisinger Health System.

$$$ and Teaching Hospitals

The New Physician had an excellent article in its December issue on the financial crisis in teaching hospitals and the impact it is having on medical education.  I strongly suggest you, soon-to-be consumers of medical educations, read this article, even though it isn't available on the Internet.

College Admissions News You Can Use

Princeton Announces No-Loan Policy

Princeton University will no longer require undergraduates on financial aid to obtain loans to help pay for their education. Beginning next fall, Princeton will eliminate its loan requirement and replace loans with grants.

Wouldn't it be great if Princeton were to start a trend?

For further details, please visit
http://www.princeton.edu/pr/news/01/q1/0127-aid.htm.

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