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August 1999 Volume 2, Issue 8
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Published by Accepted.com Linda Abraham, Editor
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Accepted.com Odds 'N Ends

We have decided to publish this newsletter as a service to our clients and others who register for it on our web site. Accepted.com's Odds 'N Ends will bring you our tip of the month, admissions information for grad, law, MBA, and medical school applicants, and news about Accepted.com.

We also welcome contributions from readers. If you have comments, questions, or perhaps an article idea, please e-mail our editor. We cannot publish everything we receive, but we will try to respond to everyone. And as always, we appreciate feedback.

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What's New at Accepted.com
Tip of the Month
Grad Admission News You Can Use
Law Admission News You Can Use
MBA Admission News You Can Use
Medical Admission News You Can Use
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What's New at Accepted.com

Pre-Med Secondary Essay Chat

In response to the enthusiastic demand of the July 14 chat participants, Accepted.com's president, Linda Abraham, has scheduled a follow-up secondary essay chat on Tuesday evening, August 17 at 6:00 PM PDT (7:00 PM Mountain Time; 8:00 PM Central Time; 9:00 PM EDT).

For more information, please e-mail chat@accepted.com or visit our chat section.

MBA Chat — Strategies for Success

Accepted.com has invited Maxx Duffy of Maxx Associates to co-host with Linda Abraham, founder of Accepted.com, a chat entitled "Strategies for Success. The online chat will be held on September 14, 1999 at 6:00 PM PDT (9:00 PM EDT).

For more information, please e-mail mbachat@accepted.com or visit our chat section.

MBA Expansion Survey

Check out Accepted.com’s expansion plans and tell us what you think about them by visiting http://www.accepted.com/help/survey.htm. And while you’re busy expressing yourself, you will automatically be enrolled in our Top Secret Drawing. The winner will receive a $50 gift certificate.

Coming Soon — Referral Reward Program

One of our best sources of business has always been word-of-mouth referral. To demonstrate our appreciation, we will be initiating a referral reward program. Details will be announced in an upcoming issue of Odds ’N Ends.

Also Coming Soon — Resume Writing

We know that your need for writing consultants probably won’t end when you are accepted to graduate school. In the coming weeks, Accepted.com will add a professional resume writer to its talented staff to help you with that all-important job search. Look for details in an upcoming issue of Odds ’N Ends.

Tip of the Month

The Worst Question

"What do the admissions people want?"

That is such a common, innocent-looking question. I hear it all the time from prospective clients, clients, and my audience when I give presentations.

However, behind that seemingly logical question frequently lurks a more sinister one: What is the magic-bullet essay that will earn me admission to the school of my choice?

You may wonder why I consider the question dangerous. Why do I cringe when I hear it? Because the questioners are either trying to avoid the necessary introspection and reflection that will contribute to a truly great application essay, or they do not want to reveal the unique and interesting aspects of their characters and experiences — their personal side.

Ironically, those who dwell on this question, usually and foolishly succeed in removing themselves from their essays in vain attempts to realize mythical expectations. Attempting to be Dr. Kildare, Bill Gates, or Johnny Cochran, they suck the personality out of their essays and ignore the unique experiences and insights that would make an admissions person say, "I would like to meet this person," or "This applicant would make a great addition to our incoming class."

So now that you can imagine me gritting my teeth and swallowing hard when I hear the words "What do they really want," you may wonder how I actually respond to the question. Pretty much along the following lines:

  1. There is no guaranteed formula, pat answer, or magic bullet that will get you in.
  2. Admissions officers want the following in your essays:
  1. They want to know what is important to you and distinctive about you.
  2. They want a well-written essay.
  3. They want you to answer the question, if you are responding to a specific question.

Now that you know what they want, you can visit http://www.accepted.com to find out how to write it.

Grad Admission News You Can Use

Identity Crisis at Schools of International Affairs

A number of articles in this section of Odds ‘N Ends have been devoted to stories of scientific graduate programs seeking to better prepare their graduates for non-academic positions in business. The Chronicle of Higher Education recently revealed that schools of international affairs are similarly attempting to prepare their graduates for the growing number of positions in the private sector. And like most of these schools, John Hopkins’ School of Advanced International Studies’ (SAIS) is struggling to remain faithful to its unique focus on history, languages, and political science while preparing its graduates for a world where business, finance, and economics are playing an increasingly important role in all arenas.

This trend, specifically, the recent hiring of two full-time professors of corporate and international finance, has triggered controversy at Hopkins. Some professors feel the school has lost its way and permitted "the culture of the three-page memo" to permeate the institution. Others feel that Hopkins, like the John Kennedy School of Government at Harvard, the Fletcher School of Law and Diplomacy at Tufts, and the School of International and Public Affairs at Columbia, must deal with the realities of the post-Cold War world. One of those realities: The percentage of SAIS graduates entering the public sector has halved in the last ten years. More and more graduates are taking positions in banking, consulting, and international business.

Law Admissions News You Can Use

Clinton Supports Law School Affirmative Action 

On July 20 at a White House meeting, President Clinton urged 150 leaders of the legal profession to increase opportunities for minority attorneys. He also urged them to provide more pro bono services to minority groups.

According to The Chronicle of Higher Education, at the meeting with the president the Association of American Law Schools announced a plan to aid law schools in defending affirmative action when it is under political or legal attack. In the past, the association has filed friend-of-the-court briefs; it will now also encourage professors to help defend admission practices or develop alternative policies to encourage minority enrollment. Finally the association announced its intent to reach minority students at younger ages, in elementary and middle schools, and encourage them to consider legal careers.

Ranking the Law Firms

Would you like to fantasize about your life after you pass the bar? Want to know the best firms for $$$, social life, prestige, or diversity? Well VaultReports.com is publishing its second annual Guide to America’ Top 50 Law Firms.

Since it is really rather early to be shelling out $35 for information that won’t be relevant for another few years, perhaps you want to view at least some of it for free online at VaultReports.com.

Oh, would you like to know what the highest paid, newly minted, legal hot shot will earn? According to Business Week Online, a cool $200,000 in his first year as an associate at New York’s Wachtell, Lipton, Rosen & Katz.

I wonder what a senior partner makes.

MBA Admissions News You Can Use

The Foreign MBA Page

The Foreign MBA Page provides a comprehensive set of links and succinct information for aspiring, current, and former MBA students. It is a site worth visiting for anyone considering an MBA anywhere in the world.

UMICH Receives $10 Million Gift for Entrepreneurship Center

The University of Michigan announced recently that it received a $10 million gift from Sam Zell and Ann Lurie to create an Entrepreneurial Institute at Michigan. The Samuel Zell and Robert H. Lurie Institute for Entrepreneurial Studies will begin to operate in Fall 1999. The institute will build on Michigan’s strong entrepreneurship programs. Key features of its program include a school-run venture capital fund and experiential learning centers from Michigan to Israel.

Med Admissions News You Can Use

Harvard to use Endowment Money for Teaching

Teaching hospitals are struggling financially, hurt by flat or declining insurance reimbursements, managed care, and reduced Medicare funding. The Chronicle of Higher Education recently reported that Harvard Medical School, in an attempt to maintain teaching quality in the face of declining revenues, will increase its spending on its teaching hospitals by $20 million over the next five years. The funds will come from the school’s $1.5 billion endowment and go to endowed medical school faculty members who must use the money "to advance medical education."

Dr. Joseph B. Martin, dean of the medical school, credited the stock market, with enabling Harvard to increase its endowment payout and "solidify our commitment to medical education at a time when traditional funding sources are being cut back." Another Harvard spokesperson emphasized that the additional funds are contingent upon the stock market maintaining its value.

Canadian Medical School Forum

Vijay Anand recently started a forum for Canadians applying to Canadian medical schools. It is just starting, so traffic is light, but if you are interested in Canadian medical school admissions, check out http://www.delphi.com/anandmed/messages.

Secondary Transcript Posted

Actually, the transcript from our well-attended secondary essay chat on July 14 was lost due to a computer glitch in our chat hosting software. We apologize for the loss made more unfortunate by the excellent content provided by our guests. However, Linda Abraham’s presentation on writing secondary essays is now available in our transcripts area.

Also, as noted in the announcement section, we will have another secondary essay chat on August 17 at 6:00 PM PDT (7:00 PM Mountain Time; 8:00 PM Central Time; 9:00 PM EDT). Please join us at
http://www.accepted.com/chat.

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