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We bet you're thinking, "Well they sound good, but what do their clients say?" Do they think Accepted.com's editors improved their essays and their chances of acceptance?

Accepted.com's clients are talking about the unique services provided by our editing and consulting team! To read more about Accepted.com's experienced professional editors, please select from the links below. We encourage you to share your thoughts and always welcome your comments!

Robbie Walker
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I also wanted to give you some positive feedback regarding the assistance I received from Joan. She was very open and honest and picked up really quick how she could help me. Joan provided feedback in such a manner that I felt safe to ask her anything--she made me feel like family. Thanks for the great service I have received to date.


Sonia Michaels
I was very happy with the service and already have recommended to a prospective law student. Your service did wonders for my personal statment. Sonia Michaels went above and beyond in helping me and I feel very confident in the final product.


Paul Bodine
I wanted to tell you that I just had a chance to review carefully your comments - wow, what great comments! It solidifies the essay so much better!

[Later}I contacted you based on a great recommendation, but not knowing exactly what to expect. What I received in return was literally a revelation. Thank you for all the exceptional work!



Sonia Michaels
I was accepted to Northern, DePaul, Kent and Indiana. I still have a few more I am waiting to hear back from, but it will be a while. ... Thanks for all of the help. I am so glad I found you guys.


Sonia Michaels
Hi Sonia! You helped me with my law school personal statement this past fall, and I wanted to let you know that I got accepted at my top choices: UC Berkeley (Boalt Hall) and Stanford Law School. Your efforts significantly improved my statement and likely helped me stand out from the thousands of other applicants with similar grades and LSAT scores! Thanks!!!!


Paul Bodine
You are amazing--your additions and comments on the essay were great! Thanks so much again... If I ever run for President, I know where I can find a speechwriter!

[Later]By the way, I never got to tell you in the end how much I appreciated your help. Best of luck!


Sonia Michaels
Thank you so much for all your help! Reading the original and the most recent, they sound completely different! The essay is much more organized and coherent.


Sheila Bender
Sheila was a big help in not only helping me formulate my personal statement, but in forcing me to think about what legal issues were important to me. Her questions about the causes that I believed in really got me to thinking. I am still mulling over this as I begin my classes. Her support has been invaluable. She is a beacon of light over the horizon.


Paul Bodine
Paul, can I just say that you made my essay sound 100% better, and you did it so quickly! I just keep reading it because it sounds so much better! You have put my last minute application anxieties at ease. This essay has been the only thing holding my applications back for a very long time, I wish I would have found you earlier.


Sheila Bender
Sheila is outstanding and very enjoyable to work with. I eagerly awaited her input throughout our work on my law school statements. She initially received my first attempts at each statement and quickly became very familiar with my uniqueness. She then helped focus my writing on those aspects that were most important. Her outline and direction made it easier for me to write effectively.

The service is outstanding. Sheila was always very prompt with her feedback on any changes that I made. She always kept time commitments As agreed.

If she presented constructive criticism, I never knew it. She was very easy to work with and any disagreements that she had with any idea that I presented was communicated to me in the most non-abrasive fashion imaginable. Sheila was extremely supportive and I felt as if I had known her for years. She did help to produce a personal statement and minority statement that represented how I wanted to present myself.

I am grateful and will never forget the service or the work that Sheila Bender has done for me as I prepare to attend law school.



Cindy Tokumitsu
Cindy was always prompt with everything.Cindy was great at her comments. I didn`t feel like she had any real criticisms, her comments were all constructive and she gave me different ways of presenting my essay. She was extremely supportive in presenting myself in my best possible light and I felt that the essay really reflected everything that I wanted to say...I honestly think that this service was perfect, I am 110% satisfied with everything.


Linda Abraham
I applied to one program (the Duke MBA - Cross Continent) and was accepted...

Cindy's assistance was invaluable. I consider myself to be a reasonably effective writer, but the Cindy's editing really served to take my 80% work and provide the polish and focus that my essays needed to stand out. In addition, Cindy's insight into the admissions process served to give me an additional level of confidence in my application package that kept me going through the interviews and the waiting."



Paul Bodine
Fantastic job with the resume. You make me feel lazy, but better that it should be done right! I'm really happy with the editing you did on my essays; I hope my writing comes up to your level someday. . . . I'd be happy to recommend you at any time to anyone.


Sonia Michaels
I would like to thank you for the nice work you did for me. It not only contained your expertise, but also your understanding of your client, to assure the right points were communicated in the work. When I contacted you, I was stressed. Some how, I found myself calmer as each step passed. Just something about you, your work, and your level of understanding. It was a great experience working with you. I am happy about my decision to call Accepted.com, and more so glad to meet and work with you.


Paul Bodine
This is just a note to express my appreciation again for your suggestions and comments in reviewing my Personal Statement... I just received an acceptance letter from XYZ College of Law. Since my qualifications were not among the top echelon, I know that my Personal Statement was a major factor in their favorable consideration. With your help, I was able to focus and clarify why I am motivated to become a public attorney ... Your bracketed comments made it easy to make the necessary revisions to prepare a polished document.


Linda Abraham
I'm not sure I could offer much by way of suggestions for improvement -- and I'd definitely make them if they were obvious, but overall I think you did a great job! The most important thing during this time was prompt, dependable and efficient communication, which happened by email and fax. It seemed more difficult by phone but when push came to shove that worked, too! During that chaotic time of writing, editing and preparing other parts of the application, you successfully helped me focus on the task at-hand and provided valuable assistance with direction and editing. Having a non-biased individual with no prior knowledge of me (with your experience) was very helpful in shaping the final product.


Linda Abraham
Harvard, Stanford, Duke, Georgetown, UCB and UCLA are some of the law schools which accepted me. I believe Linda Abraham is largely responsible for my success. When I first approached Mrs. Abraham, I did not know what to write about in my personal statement. Mrs. Abraham's thorough background in English literature and grammar, and her up-to-date knowledge of the application process was visible immediately. After utilizing her techniques and discussing my background and interests, we formulated a few sketches of possible statements. From these, I was able to write a creative, cohesive, and unique personal statement. Mrs. Abraham can help all applicants whether they are starting from ground zero or their applications need final touches.


Judy Gruen
I wanted to keep you updated on what is happening with my applications.

I am pleased to announce that not only was I accepted to one of the law schools I applied to, I received a full scholarship there for my tuition and books! The strange part is that I just mailed my applications on January 14th! My acceptance comes before the Early Decision Deadline.

Thank you very much for your help on my personal statement. I know that my awards would not have come so early with out your help.

I would like to thank you more than that, but the words aren’t coming to me right now ... I’m still in shock!


Paul Bodine
I've just finished getting all the applications material together [for LLM application] and have to say that I am very happy with the results of your work!


Sheila Bender
I like this version very much. You are truly a pro. Thanks again for the help.


Paul Bodine
Hey Paul, Man you're GOOD!!!!!!! This is excellent work. On a five star scale you get six! I'll add a few lines and send it back this weekend.

Thanks! ...

[Later] Thanks again for everything! I'll let you know how it goes when I hear from all the schools. Whether I'm accepted or not I think the service you provided was great! I plan to tell all my friends trying to get into school about you guys.

Thanks again!


Judy Gruen
You helped me with my personal statement last year for my law school applications, and I'd like to thank you again. I'm sure your help was instrumental in my being accepted to Harvard, Virginia, Vanderbilt and Emory (full scholarship at Emory). I hope that you realize what a positive impact you have on folks' lives.


Paul Bodine
Thank you. I am happy with my statement and grateful for your help. I believe that the essay is now polished and I will no longer trouble you. I should have consulted you sooner. It would have saved me a great deal of angst. Again, thank you.


Linda Abraham
Thank you so much for your help with my personal statement. The difference between my first and last draft was amazing.


Linda Abraham
I just finished applying to eight law schools and I must say that I got a lot of help from Linda Abraham. She is an online personal statement consultant and she is great! She will help you from scratch or edit for an hourly fee. I completely changed the direction of my personal statement after speaking with her. She has a lot of experience and can especially help applicants who have, like me, been out of school for a while.


Paul Bodine
First of all, I should say THANK YOU for your assistance in my person statement. I am starting [Top LLM program] this fall semester. I am very, very, very happy about this outcome.

I know that my personal statement was the determinative factor in [Top LLM program's] decision. How do I know? My personal statement that I wrote for law school admission is fundamentally different from the personal statement that you and I worked on together. I was a good student at college, but I could not get in [the same school] for a J.D. degree. But this time, they accepted me into their LL.M. program.

Thank you for your follow-up and thank you very much for your help!!! I will definitely pass the word about Accepted.com to my friends.


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